The Writer's Chatroom Topic Chat: Detail That Matters And Detail That Doesn't

Published: Wed, 10/15/14


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 Mary Carol Moore wrote the topic post for this week.  
 
I am currently prepping characters, settings and hopefully a few plot ideas for NaNoWriMo.  Everyone who is familiar with NaNo knows that writing big unedited details is a great way to make the daily word count, 1667.  We also know that post NaNo we will be either so sick of our story we close the file and walk away or we will be anxious to begin editing.  So, I am hoping we can do the 'bad' things in this post as some of us embark on a NaNo journey and I hope some of us can use this post in our current WIPs or after NaNo as a sort of mop up.  

NaNoWriMo.org
National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo) is a fun, seat-of-your-pants approach to creative writing. On November 1, participants begin working towards the goal of writing a 50,000-word novel by 11:59 PM on November 30.
Valuing enthusiasm, determination, and a deadline, NaNoWriMo is for anyone who has ever thought fleetingly about writing a novel.

This week's topic --- Detail That Matters and Detail That Doesn't:  Why the First Makes Your Writing Come Alive and the Second Dulls the Shine
http://howtoplanwriteanddevelopabook.blogspot.com/2014/10/detail-that-matters-and-detail-that.html#sthash.ce1FEdB2.dpuf

Some people love lots of sensory detail in writing.  I'm one of them. (Audrey is not one of them.) If a writer shows me the place, what the people wear, the smells and sounds, I'm right there with the story. 

But I've learned over the years that detail only works if it's relevant to what's happening.  One of my teachers called it "salient detail."  In other words, if the character or narrator isn't experiencing shifts because of the detail, it's irrelevant to the reader.  It can even derail the story's pace and purpose, dulling its shine.

Join us tonight to discuss details for the first hour. We'll take any other questions you may have in the second hour.
 
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